| Before (weak) | After (dense) |
|---|---|
| "AI optimisation strategies enable enhanced discoverability paradigms." | "AI optimisation helps your content get selected in AI answers." |
| A 40-word sentence carrying one claim. | A clear 15–20 word sentence for the key claim. |
| Multiple ideas crammed into one paragraph. | One idea per paragraph. |
| Ambiguous, jargon-heavy phrasing. | Specific, measurable language; same term for the same concept throughout. |
Why it matters
Rhetorical padding dilutes the signal and inconsistent terminology fractures the entity. "AI optimisation strategies enable enhanced discoverability paradigms" says less than "AI optimisation helps your content get selected in AI answers" — the first is noise, the second is a claim. And if the same concept is called "AI search", then "generative search", then "answer engines", a reader — or a model — may treat them as three things instead of one.
High claim density plus consistent terminology makes each claim easier to find and quote accurately — the read-side complement to the structural work in Phase 2.
Source: Google — AI Mode and AI Overviews updates (Oct 2026).
What good looks like
Dense, plain, consistent prose where every sentence earns its place:
- The same term is used for the same concept across the whole document.
- Key claims are 15–20 words, not 40-word sentences.
- One idea per paragraph.
- Jargon is replaced with plain language or defined where it first appears (Phase 2.2).
- Sections that are generic, repetitive, unsupported, or obvious are deleted.
Step by step
- Use one term per concept Pick the canonical term for each concept and use it everywhere — don't alternate synonyms for variety. Consistency reinforces the entity (Phase 5.3).
- Keep key claims to 15–20 words Tighten load-bearing sentences to 15–20 words. Long sentences bury the claim; short, declarative ones are easier to extract and re-cite.
- One idea per paragraph Give each paragraph a single idea. If a paragraph turns a corner into a second point, split it — discrete units are easier to segment and lift.
- Replace jargon with defined terms Swap inflated jargon for plain language, or define the term where it first appears. "Enhanced discoverability paradigms" becomes "getting selected in AI answers".
- Delete low-signal sections Cut anything generic, repetitive, unsupported, or obvious. Density is achieved as much by deletion as by writing — a shorter page of real claims outperforms a padded one (Phase 3.5).
Worked examples
Pick one canonical term and replace the drifting variants — the model then resolves a single, stronger entity.
Concept: AI answer engines
Drifting (before): "AI search", "generative search",
"answer engines", "AI overviews"
used interchangeably.
Canonical (after): "AI answer engines" everywhere;
other terms only where they name a
distinct, defined thing.
Common mistakes
| Mistake | Fix |
|---|---|
| Synonym variety for the same concept | Use one canonical term throughout. |
| 40+ word key sentences | Tighten to 15–20 words. |
| Several ideas per paragraph | One idea per paragraph. |
| Inflated jargon ("discoverability paradigms") | Plain language or a defined term. |
| Padding to hit a word count | Delete generic, repetitive, obvious sections. |
Limits of this advice
- Word-count targets are style guidance, not a measured threshold.
- Density is not compression: keep the context a claim needs to be accurate.
Checklist
- One canonical term per concept, used consistently
- Key claims are 15–20 words
- One idea per paragraph
- Jargon replaced with plain language or defined at first use
- Generic, repetitive, or obvious sections deleted